Thursday, June 2, 2011

The Mirror

Mirror...Mirror..Mirror

Mirror..Mirror..Mirror on the Wall...Who is the fairest of them all?
To this Mirror..the only one he loved was precious of them all

He has seen her grow from a girl to a woman
He has caressed her like no man ever can..
He has gasped as she stood in front of him with those long black locks
He wanted to have his fingers run through those..
He has loved those dark brown soulful kohl-ed eyes
He wanted to whisper sweet nothings in her ears

He has admired her luscious lips
He wanted to kiss them a thousand times

He is charmed by her slender hips
He has longingly gazed at the perfect breasts

He has embraced her reflection in himself
She had no idea of her admirer itself...
How he wish he could tell her
But, He is her mirror after all....
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19 comments:

  1. Sibitha BhaskaranJune 2, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    i read ur poem too good....

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  2. Harrish IyerJune 2, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    :-) yes, he is her mirror after all.

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  3. Jayaraman RajagopalanJune 2, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    good one D :)

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  4. Pari SambasivanJune 2, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    ...thank you so much :) :P ;)

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  5. Manjula Shenoy PaiJune 2, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    wow.. so lovely written.. its all ur writings deepa?

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  6. Karthik Trilok PasupathyJune 2, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    gorgeous poem

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  7. Maya MahadevanJune 3, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    Massssssst hai re :D..was hoping for some twist at the end.. this was choooo cute and chweet :)

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  8. Nii AnandJune 3, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    nice lyk always:-):-)

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  9. Mridula LakshminarayananJune 3, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    Hum kuch nai bole, to bhi aap samajh hi jaayenge, nai? ;)

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  10. Vignesh RamakrishnanJune 3, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    women.....n mirrors......wat mre can u xpect :p :p :p

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  11. Deepa KrisJune 3, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    am falling in love with the mirror :)

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  12. DeepaJune 3, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    Thanks Harish and J

    Pari :P

    Thanks Karthik and Manju

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  13. DeepaJune 3, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    Deepa i was always in love with it...more like the reflection on it.....i still neva relaised that i look 3 times more beautiful in the mirror's eyes

    Maya thanks girl......mera mirror ne inspire kiya :)

    Mridula aapki silence hi hamare liye words hai...

    Vignesh Ur such an understanding broda

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  14. MurugeshJune 4, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    Obsessed with mirror huh, anyways nice imagination

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  15. Sandhya SJune 8, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    Amazing blog entry! Keep those creative juices flowing! :)

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  16. CoOLdUdEeJune 10, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    very Nice and romantic

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  17. DeepaJune 10, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    Thanks Dude

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  18. AnonymousJune 10, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    ending line is good and simply poetic.

    Hi, Just want to let you know, i was on your blog since yesterday and i enjoyed your blog to the fullest reading from your last post till the latest. You have a good skill to keep the readers hooked up. Its many years I had read a blog with so much interest and i liked your blog. Do keep writing and blogging.

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  19. DeepaJuly 4, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Thank you 3rd eye

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