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I love her for what she makes me feel when I am with her
Pretending to hate her is the most difficult part of my life
One sight of her make my heart feel alive
I want to take her in my arms, look into her beautiful eyes and tell her How much I love her
A brush of her finger, make my every nerve tingle
A smile from her feels like a beautiful jingle
I meet her, I insult her
I play the love-hate game with her
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Oh sweet Baby girl
All I want to say is I keep thinking about you all night & day
I know I have hurt you, but I never wanted to
I do so, to not in fall in love with you
I know I have lost you to time
Thanks to the ego of mine
I wish I could tell you sometime
I did all, to run away from an Untamed Soul like you
This post is written for Theme Thursday - Soul & ABCW-Untamed Soul
you almost did justice to it....i liked it...but maybe you couldn't yet hit the core my baby doll....
ReplyDeletebut you sure win the challenge......
Vins.....I have done perfect justice to a man's point of you..better than your half baked description....I created a new point of you..n I so deserve that treat from you...so please do the needful...
ReplyDeletePregnant with emotion and Awesome as ever.
ReplyDeletePS: If he doesn't treat you, I will :P
Cheers :)
Thanks buddy for your comment :)
ReplyDeleteIf he dusnt treat his arms and legs will exchange places....
:)
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate this post because we know difficult it is for men and women to exchange places.
But you know how I knew that this wasnt written by a guy? Because a guy will N.E.V.E.R admit that his ego is coming in the way.. :D
nice read, woman! :)
Thanks for your comment express :)
ReplyDeleteYou are right a man will never acknowledge his ego to other but he may think to himself and maybe confess it to himself of his shortcomings
Besides its said that men become more expressive than women when they are almost drunk and sloshed...that time they blurt out things like their ego n their mistakes...
Keep reading :)
What a wonderful note!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Dipannita :-)
ReplyDeleteA brilliant poem that explores the complexity of the mind. Stunning.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranveer
DeleteWow. I think you did your best and certainly have birthed an amazing poem from the experience. Great work.
ReplyDeleteWoow, thanks a lot for this amazing compliment Gail.
DeleteIndeed great lines.
ReplyDeleteI could have never thought of 'untamed soul'.
Happy ABCW!
:-) Thank you Indrani
DeleteWow how well writen.... all emotions one can feel are in it... it makes me glad and sad at the same time.... i hope that love will overcome all the lesser nice things
ReplyDeleteHave a nice abc-day / - week
♫ M e l ☺ d y <abc-w-team)
Thanks for dropping by melody :-)
DeleteI like to think I have an untamed soul. - Margy
ReplyDeleteLucky girl you :-)
DeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteLeslie
abcw team
Thank you leslie :-)
Deletean untamed soul - interesting challenge!
ReplyDeleteROG, ABCW
Thank you Roger :-)
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