The colorful peacock somewhere, was the meanest of them all
It demeaned the crow, and called it names
Far somewhere, during the hunting games
A hunter spotted, a burst of colors
Bang! his rifle hollers
That was the moment, when the peacock and its pride had a downfall
This post is written for BAR-A-THON 2017 and my Theme for this year is Seven Deadly Sins
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Damn... that is a tough end for him :) But fits perfectly for the theme of 'Pride'!
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:-) Thanks for dropping by Roshan
DeleteLoved your take on the prompt! I think you've chosen a very interesting theme. Will keep coming and checking out your future posts too! Goodluck with the rest. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Esha :-)
DeletePride goes before a fall indeed! Lovely take on this particular sin!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Kala Ravi :-)
DeleteThat's a nice one! Sadly the world today takes note of show and talent is seldom recognized.
ReplyDeleteHasn't that been the problem for ages?
DeleteLike the famous Bollywood saying "Jo dikhta hai vo bikta hai"
Thanks for dropping by Neha
Nice take on the prompt, indeed pride get the right end as always
ReplyDeleteThank you AATW :-)
DeleteIrony. Thats how the world has become,
ReplyDeleteMean and selfish yes.
DeleteWish we go back to the nicer times no?
Thanks for dropping by Unknown
Well said. Pride does lead to downfall.
ReplyDeleteAlways.
DeleteThanks for commenting Shilpa :-)
this story scratches up my heart indeed the love becomes cruel sometimes Great read thanks for sharing Bushra www.allaboutthewoman.com
ReplyDeleteWonder if it cried as it dies and impregenated a few peahens too ;-)
ReplyDeleteNicely done on Pride!!!