One day.
One Semi fatal accident in the middle of nowhere
Saved by some strangers in a bloody semi-concious state.
Feeling dizzy, opening the eyes and overhearing Mom saying "My baby is alive. Thank God, My baby is alive"
For once, I feel like I touched heaven and came back.
This post was written for the Five Sentence Fiction - Lucky for Lille McFerrin
One Semi fatal accident in the middle of nowhere
Saved by some strangers in a bloody semi-concious state.
Feeling dizzy, opening the eyes and overhearing Mom saying "My baby is alive. Thank God, My baby is alive"
For once, I feel like I touched heaven and came back.
This post was written for the Five Sentence Fiction - Lucky for Lille McFerrin
Oh wow! High emotion drama indeed :)
ReplyDeleteThank you soumya, I got the idea to write FSF coz of you only and I totally love Life of Leo...
DeleteYou write just wonderful
When you come so close to death, you start to feel so much more grateful for life :) Awesome story!
ReplyDeleteSo true, You start feeling grateful for everything and everyone in life
DeleteVery good post. You and I must have been thinking along the same lines for this post. Mine was about a car accident too.
ReplyDeleteI did read urs too
DeleteNicely written
Well worded
If it looks like I'm entering twice, I am, because I wasn't sure if my first comment went through. I really enjoyed your post. We both had very similar ideas for "Lucky." I too, wrote a story about a car accident. I enjoyed yours very much.
ReplyDeleteAh its such a good post :)
ReplyDeleteThanks swathi :-)
DeleteReal to life, certainly. I see it when I travel. Well done.
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Thank you Ann
DeleteLucky get away, that. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteVery close shave
DeleteSomeone down here loves me more than someone up there