Wednesday, June 28, 2017

#Barathon 6/7 Deadly Sin; Wrath

When he forcefully entered her
With every thrust
Her tears turned into pain
Her pain turned into sadness
Her sadness turned into anger
When that anger turned into wrath
She pulled the broken glass near by and castrated that psychopath 

This post is written for BAR-A-THON 2017 and my Theme for this year is Seven Deadly Sins
Click here to read the previous Bar-a-Thon posts
June 17th: GluttonyJune 19th: PrideJune 21st: LustJune 23rd: Greed
June 26th: SlothJune 28th: SevenJune 30th: Seven
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12 comments:

  1. VaradharajanJune 28, 2017 at 12:01 PM

    Wow! So powerfully written. The raw emotion that is Wrath has been captured perfectly. I do hope the same happens every single time

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  2. Shilpa GargJune 28, 2017 at 5:21 PM

    Serves him right!!
    Impactful writing!

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  3. Neha TambeJune 28, 2017 at 5:52 PM

    that's a wrath where i would probably appreciate the girl for finally hitting back.

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    1. DeepaJune 30, 2017 at 11:49 AM

      One of the few who got a chance to hit back. Thanks for dropping by Neha :-)

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  4. Akshata RamJune 28, 2017 at 5:57 PM

    A few words powerfully illustrate rape and venegance

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  5. Balaka BasuJune 28, 2017 at 7:41 PM

    Yikes!!! He deserved it...

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    1. DeepaJune 30, 2017 at 11:50 AM

      He totally did deserve it. Thanks for dropping by Balaka :-)

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  6. Dr Roshan RadhakrishnanJune 29, 2017 at 8:36 AM

    Need more of this in real life... law be damned.

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    1. DeepaJune 30, 2017 at 11:50 AM

      I agree. This can be passed as self-defense.
      Thanks for dropping by Roshan :-)

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