Monday, September 21, 2015

ABCW & Mag: Morning Frost




photo by Tess Kincaid

First rain, Early morning frost
Deep in thoughts I drew, girl on a lonely night
With the moon beside
I realize, that is who I am
A hollow girl in the dew
Come sunshine, I shall vanish
No one would ever know
That once a hollow girl stood there on a lonely night
With the half moon shining so bright

This post is written for Magpie Tales - Mag 286
This post is written for ABCW - M
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24 comments:

  1. SoumyaSeptember 21, 2015 at 12:41 PM

    Beautiful use of the prompt!

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  2. kaykualaSeptember 21, 2015 at 1:02 PM

    The yearnings of the young innocents wanting to have some fun like that of their friends! Nothing serious but just!

    Hank

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    1. DeepaSeptember 21, 2015 at 2:35 PM

      Peer pressure :)

      Thanks for dropping by Hank

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  3. brudbergSeptember 22, 2015 at 12:08 AM

    To be the dew dissipating in the sun.. I hope we grow more substance than that as we age.

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    1. DeepaSeptember 22, 2015 at 10:18 AM

      Many a times a person full of substance will feel hollow inside due to circumstances,hope time brings the lost substance back

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  4. Keith's RamblingsSeptember 22, 2015 at 2:58 AM

    Vanishing in the sunlight! A delightful piece.

    Visit Keith's Ramblings!

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  5. KutamunSeptember 22, 2015 at 1:52 PM

    She has been appearing a long time , so maybe not so ephemeral after all !

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  6. Tess KincaidSeptember 22, 2015 at 7:39 PM

    Beautiful...

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  7. 21 WitsSeptember 22, 2015 at 10:33 PM

    Ah yes, and may she carry on day by day!

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  8. KathleenSeptember 24, 2015 at 7:25 AM

    Invisibility can be so cruel.

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  9. Roger Owen GreenApril 6, 2016 at 1:56 PM

    Gone, except in memory.

    ROG, ABCW

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    1. DeepaApril 7, 2016 at 10:44 AM

      memories are the hardest things to lose
      Thanks for commenting Rog :)

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  10. MelodyKApril 6, 2016 at 3:49 PM

    although well written your poem makes me sad.... I hope you do not feel the way that person does. Wouldn't wish that for anybody

    Have a nice abc-wednesday-day / - week
    ♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)

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    1. DeepaApril 7, 2016 at 10:47 AM

      Melody, luckliy I do not feel like the person does and yes, I never want anyone to go through such a phase
      Thanks for the comment :)

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  11. Murthy K v v sApril 6, 2016 at 5:30 PM

    Brilliant lines.

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  12. Leslie:April 7, 2016 at 2:00 AM

    Lovely poem.

    Leslie
    abcw team

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